there's a six feet hole
in the darkest part
of my empty soul,
moving closer to my heart.
day turns into night.
where am I? can someone tell me?
I'm moving towards the light,
that only i can see.
faith grabs me by the arms,
pulling with a hefty force,
it fights all that harms.
i'm screaming but my voice is hoarse.
as life begins to pour on me,
I take a breath of life,
knowing that he'll never be,
he's cut from me with eternity's knife.
Author notes
my love died but i returned
A contest entry
- For those who have seen death, and know his face. 2000 points for gold, more may be added. by Lord Merlynn.
2550 points, ended June 8, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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this is wonderful,
i like the wording used in the poem,
and the way it really cuts deep with emotion,
keep writing,
blessed be,
Elektra *passes black roses*
xxxx
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