So I wait
Wait till the end
To say it all
To say how I feel
And you
You say "Wait till I return"
and we'll be together at last
But how long
How long can I stand it?
And now I suffer
As my heart beats faintly
Once again
I was a fool
To really believe
That you would "return"
whoever told you
That lies make better truths?
Now I live in this world
Where my best friend
Is a blade
A friend that never lies
But instead spills the truth in red
This is what you've done
This is what you've left me with
Return to me
But only in my dreams
Your warmth won't restore my frozen heart
Your kiss won't bring back my previous life
You gave me this
And I've learned to deal with it
So be gone
So that I may wake up
Feeling the bitter loneliness
I have come to know of now
Author notes
This is normally how I feel. I'm so glad that I'm starting to come out it, though.
A contest entry
- Truth About Love by HereComesTheSun.
600 points, ended July 3, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Very nice write ... straight from heart.. clear reflection of what you must be feeling/going through.. I just paused at "Now I live in this world
Where my best friend
Is a blade" - Hope it never gets that dark and that deep for anyone in love ..
Thanks for your entry, Good Luck
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sorry
too many lines.
but great write
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powerfull, good job
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