water heavy blooms,
bend low supple knotty boughs;
breezes pink with rain
Author notes
It's spring on the west coast, and during my walk to work, I saw a cherry blossom tree, pink with bloom, boughs bent to eye level in suplication to the spring rains.
It reminded me how in a short time, the rain would be pink with pettals...
Where does it take you?
Comments
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youre quite good at this arent you- i think its everything a haiku should be- emotive, fluid imagery-2 applause only because I prefer freeform and more confessional poetry-so 2 out of a possible 2..
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I love cherry blossoms they are so beautiful!!! And I think this poem is just brilliant too!
Beautifully done, poet!
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I have always wanted to see cherry blossoms
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