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Vancouver Sakura (Haiku)

water heavy blooms,
bend low supple knotty boughs;
breezes pink with rain

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It's spring on the west coast, and during my walk to work, I saw a cherry blossom tree, pink with bloom, boughs bent to eye level in suplication to the spring rains.

It reminded me how in a short time, the rain would be pink with pettals...

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  • acari27 gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    youre quite good at this arent you- i think its everything a haiku should be- emotive, fluid imagery-2 applause only because I prefer freeform and more confessional poetry-so 2 out of a possible 2..


  • Perception
    May 4, 2008

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    I love cherry blossoms they are so beautiful!!! And I think this poem is just brilliant too!
    Beautifully done, poet!


  • Olivias Violin
    April 28, 2008
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    I have always wanted to see cherry blossoms