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Weather or not

Spring days in winter.
        Where have all the seasons gone?
Winter days in spring.

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Currently of constant concern to all. Too late?

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  • George Bowling
    May 7, 2008

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    Counter-haiku

    Weep catalyst dreams,
    Desire pallid winter's breeze,
    Concerto for Spring

    P.S. I liked this, the reversal of the first line was clever. I am a proud and informed climate change skeptic. In the years between 1990 and 2005, there was a .3 degree (C)/year rise - that's the global warming they're talking about. 2006 was a plateau, and 2007 and 2008 have been progressively cooler. In the 20s they thought there was going to be an ice age. Don't believe everything you read. Remember Y2K? Me either. But I remember the hype.


  • just mercedes gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    lovely seasonal haiku

    tanka:

    playful child who dresses in
    whatever comes first to hand

  • Aerden gold member
    April 30, 2008
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    Tanka

    Nature, like capricious girls,
    Can't decide what gown to wear.
    • WritingWretch silver member
      April 30, 2008
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      outstanding response. How can I give you points for this elequent

      take on my haiku? I haven't been around this site long enough to know how it works and I didn't see any stars to click on. I enjoy seeing the different directions the sense of one thought can take when handed off to another to finish. Nice going and thank you for your tanka. I would like to give you 10 points for it. Can you tell me how? Never mind I just foud the way.