When love invades your heart and soul
And physically starts to control
Emotions you thought you never had
And folks that know you think you’re mad
You start to feel quite warm inside
Like on a roller coaster ride
You start to notice birds that sing
While in your step you get a spring
With inhibitions in full retreat
When the music sounds you tap your feet
You tell folks that you’re feeling fine
When you get the tingles up and down your spine
So jump for joy don’t call the “quack
‘cos what you’re having is a love attack
A contest entry
- Funny Pic Prompt III by BuriedTreasures.
900 points, ended May 9, 7 entries
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Comments
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This is pretty good. The rhyming is done very well, good flow. I'd like to see a little more creativity with the word choice, and placement, but overall, pretty good. Good luck in the contest.
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So \very true
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WOWSA!Nice poem indeed
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Scintillating indeed! Thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest!
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A Cute composition!!
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BuriedTreasures
Many Thanks for your kind comments on "Love Attack Rap"
Very much appreciated.Best Wishes George. -
Breezie
Many Thanks for your kind comments on "Monkey Business
Very much appreciated.Best Wishes George
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Haha!
Love it!!! This is such a good poem! I like the line "emotions you though you never had" It has a really great flow to it. Finalist! Good luck and I'll keep you posted!
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