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Scratchin' An Itch

We stepped into the bar “Sin”
after a hard days workin’
Cherubs on the beat
playing harps so sweet

Listenin’ to lyrics of love
while drownin’ innocence of
looks that get a good laugh
no taller than your half

Rosy cheeks and nary a stitch
chillin’ at the bar, scratching an itch

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  • Deathless1
    April 29, 2008

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    i like the direction you went with this one. and i love the last line. you really put the picture into words.
    great write,
    KNIGHT TIME