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Better off Without Him

People asked me what happened
Ask me if I care
But to tell the truth
Deep down you were never welcome here
They ask me if I'm okay
I answer "Hell yeah better off without him anyway"
They ask me if im sad...
I'm not!  I'm mad
Not mad at her.. Mad at you
You were to much of a coward to tell me the truth!
I knew along so it didn't shock me
You will do her the same then come runnin' back to me
This time it's not workin' baby
No matter what kind of bullshit you try tellin me
I'm sick of your liein'
Sick of all the pain
Hell when I see da bitch im goona thank her
for takein' da pain in my ass away!!

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  • her-four-letter-lie
    August 15, 2008

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    haha wow.
    sounds like your about to beat some ass.

    i went thru something like this recently...not fun.

    anyways good write.=]

  • VampireBlood23
    August 13, 2008
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    wowza

    your one anger chick haha. Its great and thank you for the comment/rsting


  • vamapiress
    August 13, 2008
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    lov it!

    Innocentcool! your a great writer!


  • Maifromavatarrox25
    June 25, 2008
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    lol

    i like the end! great!


  • Rusty
    May 20, 2008
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    It sucks when someone plays with your feelings,love is such an easy word to say,and is said so often without meaning,thank you for sharing your thoughts,I was so hurt in the past,but was fortunate to find my true love,and have been happily married for 26

  • Maifromavatarrox25
    May 11, 2008
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    OMG!!!

    my bff just went through this with the same type of guy!!! GREAT WRITE!!!!!!!!!

  • i like this poem. its sooooo true and straight up. gurl i love it and u should keep writing!!!

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