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a beautiful friendship

the pain we feel
is the least of our problems
you and i
we are alike

you dry my tears
as i do yours
you're there for me
and i for you

hand in hand
we support each other
till the day we die
a beautiful friendship like this.

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    April 28, 2008
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    forgot these


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    April 28, 2008

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    i like this alot,
    shows deep care within a dark heart,
    your friend must feel honoured with such a poem,
    keep writing,
    blessed be,
    love Lady Elektra
    xxx


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 28, 2008

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    Very very beautiful indeed. Yes, we share a friendship born from the same things we like. I am very deeply-touched by this. It is wonderful.

    Love always
    Your friend
    Wayne Leon