Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Human Abstract

Summon yourself
For someone to hold you closer
You can't hide from the fear
That dwells within you
Over-top the lip's edge
Spilling out and hitting
The Earth below
Find someone close
Deep inside
To hold you closer
But if you don't know why
You are haunted by a million screams
Danger does not go away
These embers only grow
'Till there's nothing left
To even salvage
Here we live in these ruins
Trying to make a place
That is worth living for

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Deathless1
    April 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    this is pretty good baby.
    you are so cool like that.
    love you