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natural fangs

to spend your days
feeding on blood
can be pretty annoying too
it's not just a state of mind.

sometimes my own
sometimes my friends'
but it's hard to let go of this urge
when you're born a freak to this earth.

as my teeth came out
they noticed fangs
which i'm forever burdened with
let alone the looks i get

i knew about my thirst
from the minute i tasted blood
it's forever haunting me now
i can't leave this feeling out.

Author notes

i had them filed down last year because they cut my lower lip when i was sleeping. and the left one grew in a wierd angle. anyway, these are the pictures i kept

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  • King Nothing
    May 20, 2008

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    poor you.... I'm sorry that you had to go through that. this would fit more for the lycan, than the vampire. But anyways, you are one of the better poets out in this dismal world, hardwire. No joke.


    • hardwire
      July 23, 2008
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      thank you for the nice comments. adding you as a fave right now!!!!!

  • Galaxy2
    May 17, 2008

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    ...
    you are getting scaey, my love!
    I was thinking of developing 'relationship' with you...lol

    Brilliant, sweetie, brilliant!


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    April 28, 2008

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    hmm wow i love this one,
    very senesual in a bloody way *grins*
    mortals never understanding vampyres,
    but keep writing, i like your work,
    your talented *smiles*
    blessed be,
    Elektra xxxx


  • Wayne Leon Learmond gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    I love it. This can be viewed on so many different levels. Indeed, if you had lived, say over two hundred years ago, you certainly would have been taken as some sort of vampire. Even now, when you say you had stares. My God, people can be so simple-minded and prejudiced about anything they don't understand.

    This also came out in your piece. What also came out as well is the way that your teeth affected you, mentally. There is a name for your condition, your love of blood, and for the life of me I cannot think of what it is. Either way, this was dark deep and a little bit of an insight into your life how it was. Brilliant work honey.

    Keep writing.
    Love
    Wayne Leon

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