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I Dream of Strangers



situations are often strange
and making so little sense
the meaning indicating change
with the details quite intense
why not my friends and family
in dreams remembered sweetly
familiar folks I rarely see
their images flashing fleetly
instead are the faces of clowns
with their crimson painted leers
in unfamiliar streets and towns
bringing most dreamers to tears
without words to provide a clue
just ignoring me mostly
another stranger passing through
myself appearing ghostly
I remember colors of clothes
and the way they wear their hair
down to the shape of their nose
while I’m trying not to stare
laughter echoing cheerily
as they pass me on the street
with faces remembered clearly
if we should ever meet
dreams that are filled with faces
happily laughing and carefree
in unknown times and places
...but will they remember me



Author notes

This poem is true, I rarely dream of family. I read an interpretation of this and it indicates change or moving to a new place. I mostly think it reflects my life as a reclusive person who vaguely knows the names of my neighbors, so in reality I dwell among strangers already.
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  • a good poem - perhaps it is the reclusive aspect, those of us that choose the solitude way of life, we do tend to get disconnected from reality a little with face to face normality, and so maybe dreams is a way of keeping the mind moving along familair but strange faces of all those met in life to ease loneliness, for loneliness is close to solitude, it is a fine line.


  • Lagrimas
    June 12, 2008

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    Nice flow

    This all flows very smoothly, a very good use of line breaks in place of regular punctuation. Thank you for entering!

  • Hypocritical Oath
    May 2, 2008

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    Great

    I think we all live among strangers, it seems to be an international epidemic, not wanting to talk to the so called strangers around us, either out of fear or prejudice. But hey, that's the world today, as for this rather great poem, I love it. The rhyming was used almost perfectly so as not to sound forced, and the flow of the lines worked great too. Well done, finalist for sure!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 28, 2008

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    Very Well Penned with a profound message--Excellent flow of unforced rhyme--Well Done and best of luck to you in the contest!