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Gotta Escape Today

Gotta get away there's a test today.
Only its lunch time and the teachers are blocking my way.
This isnt fair I didnt study.
The teacher planned this I know it.
And I cant find my buddy to help me get a quick study.

Everythings a mess the bell just rang.
Somehow I have to get out or I'm gonna get all the blame.
Come on now give me a break I was up late.
Amd as I thought you dont care.
Please let me out im gonna start pulling my hair.
Everythings a mess and some morons sitting at my desk.

Think I gotta think maybe if i play sick.
Only they say i'm ok and wouldnt care anyway.
Dang what do I do shes passing out tests.
Ahh forget it give me the damn test.
You gotta be kinding you damn little bitch you gave me an F because I misspelled Fuck This.

i didnt have much time to write it hope its good =)

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  • nirmal
    May 1, 2008

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    gave me a lot of smiles.. nice little poem.. you sure are very creative with your poems.. i would love to read more of your works


  • Decorus Somnium
    April 30, 2008

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    Hahahahaha riiight.This was FUNNY! and I love it. It happens to all of us. Bad days at school haha. Adorable poem.
    Keep Writing


  • Semper-Fi Juggalette
    April 29, 2008
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    lmao great poem!
    i literally laughed
    u gotta knack for
    funny ones dont ya?
    lol i still loved it


  • Brethaknee
    April 28, 2008

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    okay you got to tell me whats with the bunny thing lol
    also i love this poem i can see that being like a stream of conciousness like something someone actually thought


    • Erozay
      April 28, 2008
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      what bunny thing 0_0 ??


      • Brethaknee
        April 30, 2008
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        well you always and i men always talk about a bunny at the end of your poems bt the bunny part makes no since


        • Erozay
          April 30, 2008
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          but there wasnt a bunny in this one and i only had like two poems with bunnies in them


  • Brethaknee
    April 28, 2008
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    lol

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