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~*~Soul Music~*~

You are...

the composer

the rhythm and

the melody of

my love song

without you

I am an

unfinished symphony

A contest entry

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  • Beautiful, and words any woman would want to hear, certainly has a sigh factor to it, thank you for your lovely entry and good luck in my contest, Josie

  • twodie4
    June 7, 2008
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    lovely


  • Xmjx
    April 29, 2008
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    OMG SHEAR SWEETNESSS FROM THE HEART OF ONESUGUR U NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME ANUTY SHELL


    • onesugar gold member
      April 29, 2008
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      Hey up MJ

      I know I'm amazing LOL!!!

      I hope you are winding my brother up for me

      Cheers for the comment see you soon

      Love Shell xxx

  • midnightblue1272
    April 28, 2008
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    Pretty

    Very pretty words, sis. Nice dedication there. Fine work.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 28, 2008

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    Very beautiful. The flow is really good in this piece. Very romantic too, displaying words of dedication and love. good luck in the competitionn hon.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    xx


    • onesugar gold member
      April 28, 2008
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      Thanks hon, always a pleasure to have you read and comment, valued and appreciated.
      Love ~sugar~ xx

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