love and lost, is over rated
i cant bring myself to love again
there's flings and friendship
but where is my love now?
am i buried with you?
is my love a ghost?
why did you have to leave me here?
i'm still filled with questions
why not me?!?!?!
i don't understand
what i felt for you was real
i still dream about you
sometimes the thought of you scares me a little
sometimes i try to let go
sometimes i still lose control
i don't know what to feel
my first son is named after the only angel i know
you my love, you
i like to think that you still visit me at night.
that you talk to me and make me smile
i still see your face sometimes
it still makes me cry
please my love, remember me
as if you're still alive
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A contest entry
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beautiful write. i know the feeling. my first daughter will be named after my lost love. Britney Jo. i could feel the emotion while i was reading this. very beautiful.
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wOw!!DiS bRoUgHt TeArS 2mY eYeS!!iTs An ExCeLLeNt PoEm!!n It BrInGs A dEePeR eMoTiOn OuT!!Um..I kNO dErS nUn I kAn ReAlY sAy 2Um ChEeR u uP!!bUt...JuS kNo DaT hIs AlWaYs WiT u!!N iM sUrE hE lUvD u BaCk JuS aS mUcH aS u LuVd HiM!!rEmEmBeR iM aLwaYs HeRe 4U iF u NeEd sUm EaRs 2LiStEn n HeLp!!
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this poem is amazingly written and styled,
the pain from shatterd heart is sometimes too much to bare, but we all heal in time,
love is neither cruel nor kind, lovely poem here dear,
keep writing,
love Elektra xxx
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aww..wow..this is really sad...
thanks for the entry
Kass -
Deeply sad. Losing a loved one is never easy. I have lost many in my time. But life, such as it is goes on. You have written this from your heart. I can feel the emotion pouring from you within this piece. Never forget that they are always with you. You have written beautifully-well here.
Love
Wayne Leon
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