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No cries

Baby where have the days gone?
No...
Baby, where have OUR days gone?
We used to be one
Induldged in the sun
We used to kiss
Aren't those the days you miss?
Now you're with him..
That son of a bitch...
Our love was passionate
But now our love is split
Torn in two
All by you
I hope your happy with him now
Forget our love, forget me now.
Let me fade away with this emptiness
Let me fade away, with our abandoned bliss
Come along for the ride
Of my empty sucicide
YOU'VE killed me inside
YOU'VE killed all my pride
The red under my covers wont be a big surprise..
No, no no!!
You bitch! You're unworthy of my demise
I see now, you haven't killed me inside
You've never made me cry!
But you've made me strong
You've made me see what's really wrong!
And that is you.
You've split my heart in two but
You've shown my mind what's true
So now our flame dies
And, babe, there'll be no cries....

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Meeh

Ever feel like this?

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    May 2, 2008
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    Welcome to All Poetry

    A powerful piece that is written with such a strong and outletting personal feel within it. Your questions grips the reader to feel the meaning, depth and emotion that is clearly placed within your words. The emotion expresses pain yet a feeling to remain strong as well.


  • Bohemianwriter
    April 30, 2008
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    Holy shiznizzle! this is awesome....everything about was greeat!....keep writing..


  • Dont Lose THE ONE
    April 30, 2008

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    Nice way to get out your feelings!!!! Lol. But um...." I see now, you haven't killed me inside// You've never made me cry!// But you've made me strong" ~ Amazing Amazing Amazing. I love the way you take the good out of something bad.

    "You've showm my minds what's true// So now our flame dies// AND, BABE , THERE'LL BE NO CRIES"~ That was a great way to end a poem. And I loved the ending just FABULOUS. Loved the ending to death. And it's a good thing that you found out what was true and what wasn't before you go to deep! =]
    XxBreak-LoosexX


  • theflamepoetess
    April 29, 2008

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    i really like this is has sum nice emotions in it, and a greater understanding of a there are good in all, i can relate to this and this is prolly why i like it so much