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mingled mind

i sit alone
cold at night
youre so far away
there's no use in missing you

a troubled past
haunting me
still i'm locked up
fear gnawling at my spine

patience knocking at my bedroom window
fear is locking up my bedroom door
ascape is not an option
it only soothes depression

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    April 28, 2008

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    very dark poem here, i like it alot,
    it shows confusion of ones mind,as if the room is locking you inside because you know running doesnt solves anyway but ease's the pain, if you ever feel cold and hurting, think about the good things that are there in your life,a friend or a memory that always makes you smile,
    that works with me i hope your ok,
    keep writing,
    love Lady Elektra xxx