Hibiscus fury whips run-for-cover anxiety
being rinsed of sticky sweat-dried wait
by floods of sky-gobbling greed
to know our faithy survival
licks off bony notions
that we were ever safe
Author notes
jpg = Jim Wehtje
prompt = title, 30 words
In a list
A contest entry
- Tropical Cyclone by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 28, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I didn't even need to see the prompt and I knew wht this was... it ain't nice to fool mother nature... Brillint and vivid piece!!!
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How immensely grasping and vividly creative... x
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Ty...I loved writing this one
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Telling it as it is...
"licks off bony notions
that we were ever safe"
Profound Penning, Poet!
~ Nicky♥
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Youa re such a dear critiquing friend... you never have anything but nice things to say.
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This is awesome in its power of description. "sky-gobbling fury" is the most amazing phrase. Brilliant.
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ty star-shine.
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