The sooner I can runaway,
The better I'll be.
Hide myself far away,
Where no one will find me.
Someday I will runaway,
Soon enough I will escape.
Six feet under ground,
That's where you're gonna find me.
17 years of a broken soul,
A fucked up family.
And no where to go,
I'm gonna get away.
Someday I will runaway,
Soon enough I will escape.
Six feet under ground,
That's where your gonna find me.
The blade goes deep,
I begin to drift.
A smile on my face,
To show I'm not afraid.
I ranaway,
I finally made my great escape.
Buried six feet under ground,
That's where you found me.
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Comments
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Sometimes I want to do this as well.
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This was really good. It got kind of repetitive near to the end (like a chorus of a song). I loved the rhyming- it was amazing.
"Someday I will runaway,
Soon enough I will escape.
Six feet under ground,
That's where your gonna find me."
That was my favourite line. I don't know why, but it was really good. :]
Great Write,
Mel
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Wow..
I can really realate to this poem so much ...
especially the lines...
"17 years of a broken soul,
a fucked up family."
and also...
"The blade goes deep,
I begin to drift."
I really like this poem and it's emotion.
Well one ... Rachel x
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