as the wheel squeals cogs turning in my brain
turning turning turning
sending me insane
as the sound pounds drums beating in my ears
beating beating beating
sending me insane
and the night is bright dark light shining in my eyes
shining shining shining
sending me insane
behavior breeds insanity in this insane world of bombs and butterflies
I’m just a lost dog; wandering Waiting till the bomb explodes ~ chasing butterflies ~
waiting waiting waiting
sending me insane
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A contest entry
- PIF PICTURE INSPIRED CONTEST..... by jcat.
875 points, ended April 30, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
be thoughtful, tactful and HONEST!
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Wow, congrats on the gold. I LOVE the layout of this, I could really feel the way it was meant to be read (and did kind of make me feel insane too, lol). Well done.
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ooooh! well done, i can see why you got the gold for this!!!
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Thanks!
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Congrats on the gold, you really deserved it! The layout is awesome, and the emotion is great. I love the rhythmn and repetition. "of bombs and butterflies"- one of my favorite lines!
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wow...
very nice write you have here...congrats on the gold..
andi
(redhanded)
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