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I wear his dog tags.

I wear his dog tags,
They say his name,
His life on this litte tag.

I wear them now,
When he doesn't need them,
It's something of his I can wear.

I wear his dog tags,
Like I wear my ring,
A promise to me he has given.

I wear his dog tags,
Military his life,
And me? His love.

I wear his dog tags,
Between the times he has off,
The time that he has with me.

I wear his dog tags,
And start to cry,
For he is soon to leave me.

I wear his dog tags,
Until the last hour,
When he boards that plane.

He wears his dog tags,
As we both cry,
And say goodbye for sometime.

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  • LiMarie silver member
    May 5, 2008

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    Very topical and very sad.. I like the fact that he's got on his tags in the last stanza.. Good write