your look magically pulled ribbons out of my mind.
it was dragged smoothly and slowly ,I like the way.
it wondered me as I could nt know there was
such and such coloured ribbons inside me .
Just a glance from you could do magic.
But how could you do it , just with a glance?
it could change my mood as cloudy sky cleared
I stood as a statue ,for your eyes only
there four eyes , for hours , for ours time.
golden hours of silence silent you and me.
Unknown to me ,you and ,magic ribbons flowed.
flowing time , floating thoughts, gleaming ribbons.
Then why did you went away with all the ribbons ?
changing the sky again cloudy ?
Author notes
magic is an art . sometimes ,some moments magic HAPPENDS
A contest entry
- prose. by layla..
7914 points, ended May 31, 2008, 14 entries
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Very beautifully written!!!
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The ribbons reflect the unraveling of a love and of the self, I found the image beautiful...I liked this very much.
~E.
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First off, I am looking for humor. This ain't even close. Better luck next time
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i found this a little confusing, i don't really get the shift of images perhaps i don't get many of the images at all. this was a good effort, though. thanks for entering
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