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Dreaming

wake up and see yourself floating towards the clouds
it kindof make you feel like your weight is less than 20 pounds
a soft feather feeling is stuck to your back
hello jack a voice says in his ear
wow he said how did you appear
im inside of you dident you know that
I kindof wonder off as I sat on a rock
your in a kingdom a kingdom of dreams
could I be where there souls and white beams
(laughter)
yes you are jack lets take you to your home
but I dont want to go back home
oh well ok ill wake up from this dream
but jack your not dreaming welcome to heaven

i didnt write an ending...i need some help out. leave an ending if you wish. thanks a bunch

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