Your whole world could come crashing down
Nothing but emptiness around you surrounds
Your entire universe suddenly is gone
Leaves questions of how do you move on
All this and more in the blink of an eye
When the child you love suddenly dies
4/28/08
My granddaughter died on 3/28/08
1 month today...
She was 5 weeks old….
In a list
A contest entry
- Blink by Tigris.
450 points, ended June 8, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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omg
i am soooo sorry for your loss, i really am, i know how it is to lose some one, and it's not a nice feeling. I am very sorry.. -
It's heartbreaking and beautiful. I'm so sorry for your loss. Thank you for your entry.
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*rose* *love* PRECIOUS *love* *rose*
An absolutely precious, precious and so gorgeous a picture of these two together,
lovingly captured, this picture has left footprints on my heart. I feel so moved,honoured and priviledged to have been able to share it *tears*. Words fail me just how spectacular this image is of a caring brother ever so gentle with his gorgeous little sister
'In the blink of an eye'
heartrending
deeply
felt
for
you
ALL
and more and
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That picture caused me to literally gasp. ... I can't believe how much love and tenderness there is in that... I just... ... wow... ... seriously... and the poem to follow... you've brought tears to my eyes.. no joke. Thank you for the read.
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So Heart Breaking
Such a beautiful picture and so heart breaking too. Yes just in a Blink of an eye. I'm so sad a sorry for your loss. The whole family grieves including your precious grandson. It just doesn't make any sense. Your grandson will appreciate this beautiful poem for him and his little baby sister. Prayers and love always coming your way.
Wishing Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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This is a great write filled with emotion. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wonderful write here full of painful and sorrowful expression. I cant imagine the feelings and hope I never do. Wonder4ful write and best wishes in teh contest,
Evan
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Another Heartfelt & Sincere Composition for Chloe--Very Appropriate for this contest's Title!
Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!
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So very very sad. We do search for answers, answers I believe we will get when we pass on ourselves. There is nothing more tragic than losing a child before you. A heartrending piece this is.
Love
Your Brother
Wayne Leon
xx
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Our love is about you always
We dont understand and we search for answers of why yet only one will answer that for us in time and as we come before him she will be there and all will be answered . Keep the faith and we shall find our way .God Bless you and your family to reach out and know she now watches over you and keeps you safe forever
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aw so sad and hear wrenching cathy but what abeautiful pic of these little ones...
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Sis
Yes how tragedy strikes at a blink of an eye.
I love the picture of Gage and Chloe, such a special bond you can feel it.
A month today
Julie
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