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colorblind

What would you do if you could see no color?
Would that make everything in the world duller?
You'd have less choices thats for sure.
But what if you'r told there is a cure.

Would you fight for the colors that are now in your head?
Or just lie down and cry in your bed.
So in the end what would you choose.
To fight for your colors or lay down and lose.

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  • PonyPride
    May 14, 2008
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    very good poem but not what I asked for


  • red14lilli
    May 13, 2008
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    wow... nice i like it


  • S a r a h 4 5
    April 28, 2008
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    this was really interesting. i really liked it! ur just getting better and better!