What would you do if you could see no color?
Would that make everything in the world duller?
You'd have less choices thats for sure.
But what if you'r told there is a cure.
Would you fight for the colors that are now in your head?
Or just lie down and cry in your bed.
So in the end what would you choose.
To fight for your colors or lay down and lose.
A contest entry
- The colors of our world by PonyPride.
900 points, ended May 15, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Almost anything goes! by EmeraldDaze.
425 points, ended June 8, 2008, 74 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very good poem but not what I asked for
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wow... nice i like it
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this was really interesting. i really liked it! ur just getting better and better!





