Laying here, fluttering my black wings
Gazing into this pure stream
This is only half of who I am
The surrounding fog and dying trees
Proof that I am not all innocent
Not knowing the truth
Confused on who I should be
I stare into this clear water,
looking deep within myself
Is this who I truly am, is this really myself
Author notes
Laying here, fluttering my black wings
In a list
A contest entry
- PIC INSPIRED SEMI-QUICKIE (PIF) by Angelflower.
800 points, ended April 29, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Doesn't sound confuzzed to me... it's great.
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I really liked this. You did a great job on the prompt. Loved the last two lines... Well done, and best of luck..
Angel
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self examination is what I see also and you penned your words nicely. Good Luck
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Wow, I love the name "Half Pure", and how she doesn't know who she is. Lots of people can relate to this poem. Well done ^^
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you did a good job on this one. i know im gonna lose (i did one for the same contest).
i like the line: proof that i am not all innocent
i dont know why but i do
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i like it. =)
very good, keep writing awesome poems -
Ohhh I really like this one.My fav of all the poems I read that were wrote by you.Keep it up!
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