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misty winters morning

a forgotten soul
trapped in winter's cold
dead leaves blowing in the mist

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  • DogFish silver member
    May 11, 2008
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    the sprintime as far away
    as a warm cabin and lamplight


  • just mercedes gold member
    April 30, 2008
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    a feeling of sad isolation here

    tanka:

    winter's work is nearly done
    as the leaves uncover spring


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    April 28, 2008

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    very nice haiku, dark wording,
    creates an eerie feel to it,
    i like it,
    keep writing,
    love your wok,
    blessed be,
    Elektra xxx


  • Supa Fox
    April 28, 2008
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    forsaken memories left
    to wander the dark forest


    Great haiku, I like the word choice here.


  • sheltered
    April 28, 2008
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    Great,.. Love it.

    hairs yellowing and brittle
    on frost covered old man's beard


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 28, 2008

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    You pieces produce wonderful imagery here. This left me cold, sad and I could feel the desolation. You are a wonderful writer

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x

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