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The beauty of love

The Beauty of Love
Her face, touched by an angel
Radiates sunshine throughout the whole world
Her sweet and peaceful manner
Envies not even the wise and bold.

Her melodious singing, a gift from above
Travels through time like a whisper
She loves the sense of wisdom and happiness
Hence she is my closest sister.

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  • Sunshine Princess
    May 22, 2008
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    This is very nice yes I like it have a good day


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 28, 2008
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    This is so beautiful but there is a 30 word limit... x


    • reymysterio
      May 2, 2008
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      I'm trying to go back and change but it says would you like to change your poem into adifferent poem

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 28, 2008
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    excellent

    Wow Andreas this is beautiful! I wasn't sure who or what this was about until reading the last line. Your sister is so blessed to have you for a brother. If only all siblings loved each other the way you and your sisters do. What a better world this would be. Thank you for sharing this. Lots of love to you. Brian


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    Aww what a lovely write... such a great tribute to someone!

    (just thought I'd mention there's a 30 word limit in this contest so you can edit before judging )

    Enjoyed reading this!

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