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You remind me

Hi, you know you
really remind me
of someone I used to know
many years ago.

You look like a replica,
the voice identicle
Only, the warm smile he had
you don't seem to have.

He made my heart melt,
was such a sweety
then one day he left...
Oh, how I wept!

Hi, you know you
really remind me
of someone I used to know
many years ago.

I don't think you
remember me, or
mybe just choose
simply not to.

Either way, I'm
pleased to meet meet you
I may see you around
when you've returned

and taken off your
imaginary crown.

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  • Domz101
    April 29, 2008

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    i got butterflies...lol!

    lethal wee write here mate, sweet too!
    liked this one and it was written in that
    manner you have mastered! good one - domz