Life is like a snail
Getting sent out with nothing,
but the clothes on your back
Working hard to get somewhere
Moving slowly but surely
Facing great heights and,
hitting bumps along the way
No one but yourself to depend on
Evolving as time passes
Eventually you will get there
A contest entry
- PIF ~ By Lavender Butterfly by Lavender Butterfly.
520 points, ended April 28, 2008, 7 entries
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Very expressive and meaningful. I had to highlight the font though to be able to read this.... x
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wow, this is very good. i love what you got out of the prompt. an overall good poem, keep it up. it's beautiful
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Wow you did such a great job on this prompt! I saw it and was like "umm, nope can't do it" lol. nothing came tomind, but this.. was just amazing.. I really liked what you got out of the prompt.. Best of luck!
Jetleena
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Nice take on this prompt, written nicely. A life's lessons in so few words. Best of luck to you.
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WOW I LIKE IT!! ^^
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