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Bleed it out.

Stronger than you'll ever know
more passion that one should show
I'm crying,
trying
slowly dying
I hate you.
I love you.
I want you
            I  need
to cut
myself
I yearn
to bleed
it out.

Watch me.
I shout.

I love you.

hit it.

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  • IT Refugee
    May 17, 2008
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    I like how this one darts around like a chaotic dance. Your passion burns through the words.


  • Phaethon
    April 29, 2008

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    it's hard to see that love can become such a powerful range of emotions, filling hatred and passion at the same time.
    I hope you find your happiness with the person of whom you dream.
    good write