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Slow ascent

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She lived her life
low to the ground,
oblivious to the world

decisions made,
time to ascend
her own mountains

no matter what
she finds above

no one can say,
she didn't try

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Picture Prompt: painted by Vladimir Kush
10 Lines or less

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 28, 2008
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    This holds such depth and immense meaning within.,.. x


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    April 28, 2008

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    uplifting and a wonderufl take from the picture darl

    I like the ending..no one can say she didn't try..how true

    Good luck in the contest


    Cin


  • Im2lost4love
    April 28, 2008

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    Very inspirational. A fine write, says so much in so few words. Positive is good. Best of luck.


  • Cannonsfire
    April 28, 2008
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    All we can hope for in this life is that if we attempt something, it was worth doing. Love, C