life's music

A contest entry

• 3 Lines by . 300 points, ended May 4, 20 entries
  Gold trophy winner
  • next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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  Katie Lazette
  April 28
  
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  Wow, my friend. You have penned a masterpiece with your 3 lines. Good luck in the contest....Katie

  
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    Estel-amour
    April 28
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    thank you

by Estel-amour

On Apr 28 1:45 AM
Last login June 10

© Zach Payne, All rights reserved
0 views, 1 visitor views, 3 lines. Age 17

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