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last thoughts of the day

In the last moments before I fall asleep,

my mind reaches out beyond its normal confines;

across the continent and the sea, it flies to you,

upon a chance eastward draft.

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and in those moments, I consider

just how lucky I am to have you.

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though my words are plain and unadorned,

my love for you is deep rooted and eternal.

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Why can't I breathe whenever I think about you?...
Why can't I speak whenever I talk about you?...

 

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel gold member
    April 28

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    aww this is soo beautiful,
    i love it, your one of the best poets i know zach,
    you always express your emotions so well through your words, you truely have so many talents,
    love you Bri aka Queen Kitty hehehe