Snatches run concurrent by degrees
caught up in time's frayed arms.
No one's immune, or overly favored.
Just moments, really, lived in stages.
One moment can turn the whole book out.
One tiny moment can make the difference.
Intangled in the everyday coarse of life,
one makes or breaks their way, in slots.
Some tie themselves up in proberbial knots.
Time slots prove the utmost incrementation.
Maxed out and heading for the brim are we
sometimes in our race to snatch back time.
A contest entry
- Blink by Tigris.
450 points, ended June 8, 2008, 17 entries
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Moments are a blink in time, wonderful if you can make them rhyme!
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I love this review, hahaha, the poetic review, and sharp in 13 words, you rock and you go now hahaha excellent review lol
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I really like the first stanza and when you say that no one's immune or overly favored by time. That was cool. Thank you so much for your entry.
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Thanks for your lovely comments lol
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A very well written piece. My best wishes in the contest.
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Thank you so much, lol I appreciate
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a moment is either a blink or it can last for a lifetime, i am niot sure the host will see that in my pome but i did when i wrote it here you have a good poem
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You think it relates to the 'blink' thingy? I will reread yours againlol
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