She scratched her fingers
quite oblivious
to the calligraphy
she was leaving behind.
A trembling grasp
her emotional stimulus
gave away like solemn whip lashes.
When I crossed the tree, I cried.
It said
~I love you~
A contest entry
- PIF ~ By Lavender Butterfly by Lavender Butterfly.
520 points, ended April 28, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Didn't actually like the picture this poem was to, luckily the poem is awesome. Very well written painted imagery better than the picture it was for.
A brilliant write.
Laura
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yeah!! Its a weird picture allrite
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wow!!! i understood the poem and loved it.i imagined the picture first and then saw it. they were very similar. loooove it.
ashi
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How divinely captivating. This is a stunning piece of writing... x
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well done as one reaches distances for the destinatoin of hearts enwrapped within grasping with all might. many blessings always xxx
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Oh my gosh...I went to see the picture first...than I came back and read your poem..they caught me...they were real emotional and all just made for this picture...Stunning together...
I hope you will call a publisher some day to let more people enjoy your poetry...
You're one of the best Preets...you really are...
Make advantage of your talent...
XXJeannette
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