Uncontrollable, unrelentless,
timeless agonizing
over someone selfishness and fear
to seperate me physically and mentally
from my beloved daughters and son
Reminded over and over again
on a past mistake but had
been reassured by everyone that
the past is past and that one must
go on and forgive
While I wait I go over and over in my mind
the suffering of one so innocent and human
that has paid a terrible, inhumane price of a learning
mistake
A contest entry
- when despair becomes beautiful by unraveled.
450 points, ended May 5, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting, I think this would have benefited from more length and detail though, and I'm not sure I see the beautiful side of it. Hopefully this is not a personal piece, the despair is paramount as pictured...
-cassidy -
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There is no beauty in my life
THere is only despair and that is the beauty of it.
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