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Comfort

As the sun did its job,
and casted light upon the shadows of earth,
I realized why dawn is called mourning,
And sank back into the bottled comfort.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 11, 2008
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    Thank you and very sweetly written and strong!!! Nice job