Without you,
Saturn's rings cried
my world,
went super nova
dissolved,
I need you... back
Author notes
Prompt: Picture Prompt
painted by Vladimir Kush
A contest entry
- Surreal Illusion # 9 ~ other worlds by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended April 28, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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the line i need you back just sums up the whole poem well done, short and too the point
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awww, how tuching!!!!
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How beautifully sad and touching... x
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I enjoyed the air about this
poem found in it's structure, it lets us fill in the
darkness and blanks with our own imageries and meanings.
Very well done!
ears/Seattle
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Wonderful!! Oh my god...ur refrences our absolutely stunning! I guess these beautiful pics that LB puts really inspires us in a great way!
All the best again!!
pri
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