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Unbound Souls

Released,
     unbound, chains broken

encompassed souls,
     caresses orienteering the stars

wings fluttered,
     musical notes eloped






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Prompt: Picture Prompt

painted by Vladimir Kush

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 28, 2008
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    This is beautifully breathtaking... x


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    Applause-Applause-Applause!

    Talent, talent, talent, lies within this mighty poetic
    soul! True feast of a well written poem!
    ears/Seattle


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 27, 2008
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    Open release, yes, well notedlol

  • phoenixonfire
    April 27, 2008

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    WOW!!! This is awesome!! I dont know why i even bother to enter with such beautiful poets around! Its scary
    Excellent imagery of the prompt!!

    All the best!
    pri