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Tender tear






I touched my dying infant.





   
~let me cry
    in belief
  that I can live~



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The option on the 4 line poem

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  • carole21
    July 5, 2008

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    sad

    sad but honest write for the prompt . . liked "let me cry" and "that I can live" . . congrats on the trophies . .


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 12, 2008
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    Very sad.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    April 28, 2008

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    Awww Preeti....to live is to cry...but after all the cry's there will be a smile too...it's all part of this game called living...a learning experience, getting hurt, making mistakes...well...blablabla...

    I think we poets have different words of expressing and undergoing all of this..gladly..because it makes life so much more worth living

    I'm not sure if I understand all of this rambling myself but I loved your little poem here a lot..

    Luv ya Preeti
    XXJeannette


  • Cannonsfire
    April 28, 2008
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    Pulls at the heartstrings in its sadness. Congrats. Love, C


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 28, 2008
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    How incredibly sad and attention grabbing... x


  • In Too Deep1
    April 27, 2008

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    oh my! This is an eye opening and deep writ. Such an emotional piece in so few of words. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp

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