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Welcome To Lullabyhaven

Be found at lullabyhaven;
the set apart place designed for you.
Yes, all around us the world is in crators.
This is just stark reality.
But you are in lullabyhaven...

and, you are there for all of eternity.
So relax; what have you to fear?
Everthing here is quite supreme,
including the fined lined sunshine,
that flows melodiously downstream.

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  • Desire gold member
    May 3, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Wonderful Your piece qualifies and elated to see You backBest wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • Desire gold member
    April 30, 2008
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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Welcome To Lullabyhaven
    This piece tugged at Spirit and when I began to read...
    I was seeing this image from a movie...seen years ago
    with Yul Brynner...I think it was Futureworld
    but I am seeing Yul with the cowboy hat on his head

    Oh My~~ also hearing: Stepford Wives...
    also seeing Nicole Kidman...

    Normally I would send an IM if I notice a hiccup
    but since this is anonymouse...have to do it this way~
    sorry- Everthing here is quite supreme,
    Did You mean Everything...looks like a letter was missing which happens to me~
    and in the first line...It seems like a word or two is missing- for it felt like You had a thought and I was getting a partial idea-Be found at lullabyhaven;
    Love the word: Lullabyhaven

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    and, you are there for all of eternity.
    So relax; what have you to fear?
    Excellent take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~



  • individuality gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    i feel like dreaming now lol rocking on the crest of your breat and wondering where the gin and tonics are without the tonics

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