Is that it?

Nocturnal kisses
painted hallucination...

....scissors
cuts parchments
unheld by lovers

our distance outnumbers
feelings

~seperation~

Author notes

Picture credit: painted by Vladimir Kush

Surreal Illusion # 7 ~ always together by Lavender Butterfly. 400 points, ended April 28, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
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carole21
May 8, 2008

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nice
nice write for the prompt . . liked "painted hallucinations" and "scissors cut parchments" . . surreal . . congrats on the trophy . .
Lavender Butterfly
April 28, 2008
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Truly creative and deep with meaning... x
- phoenixonfire
  April 28, 2008
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  Thanks
2lullabyhaven
April 27, 2008

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Well thought out lol
- phoenixonfire
  April 27, 2008
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  is something funny..tell me tooo??
- - 2lullabyhaven
    April 27, 2008
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    Oh not at all, I use these things as smiles; as my trademark of sorts..cool?
  - - phoenixonfire
      April 27, 2008
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      Okay! But it might confuse the writer..
In Too Deep1
April 27, 2008

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This is such a beautiful and creative take on the prompt. As always, your pen pushes the letter and raises the bar. Thanks for sharing my friend and best wishes in the comp
- phoenixonfire
  April 27, 2008
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  Thanks...