I offer you
My scarifice
May they recieve
No Paradise
Fires burning laid to waste
Pyres, mourning, foes disgraced
Desires forming through distaste
Liars cringing, they're encased
IN FIRE!
You're my sacrifice
I burn you to the ground
Souls are to be slaves
Plague of lice
Or you are bound
To fill another grave
I own your soul
And soon you'll find
Another world
With tortured minds
All kneel down
Chant our Lord His prayer!
(background through verse: DIE! DIE! DIE!...)
Feel the flesh melt from your skin.
Devil laughs, you're God's no more.
Dagger plunges deep again.
BRING FORTH UNHOLY WAR!
I've given
My sacrifice
A throne awaits
In Paradise
Author notes
This is for my current project, and the one I've held together longest. Check it out.
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Comments
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I love the intensity to the verses. Whomever you may be pissed off with when you or whoever else wrote this, you give those people no quarter. And I do definitely love the frankness of it
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Hehe...I like this.
Definitely has an affect to it that makes me smile in all the best ways. The flow was very well done and the word selection seemed to fit quite nice ;] Overall, great job.
*P.S First stanza, second line: minor typo on "Sacrifice". Just FYI :]
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