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One way-the glowing light




Sulphur light
  yellowing pathways
      surpass in silence.

Your timid intentions
pace in solitude
...a mild grimness maybe.

left
  lost
    forever
      ~one way~









Author notes

Its an expression that there is no way out once I come to the place.

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  • Desire gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: One way-the glowing light
    This piece tugged at Spirit and while I was reading this several times...May sound strange but I was seeing:
    Pippi Longstocking...now I watched that show as a child
    when it was the Swedish version also the Americanized
    version ...but specifically seeing the Swedish version with her name:
    Pippilotta Delicatessa Windowshade Mackrelmint Efraim's Daughter Longstocking
    apparently in Swedish: Pippilotta Viktualia Rullgardina Krusmynta Efraimsdotter Långstrump
    I'm actually seeing the child actress: Inger Nilsson
    I also was seeing: The Monkees and Davy Jones
    Now it feels like: personality connection also...
    between You and the ones I mentioned above

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    Your timid intentions
    pace in solitude
    ...a mild grimness maybe..
    Excellent take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~