Her silent fluttering
reflects
in eyes...
...somber shade of red
recognised
in strangers whimper.
~memorizing~
our smiles death
the glorious cliche.
Author notes
Glorious cliche implies the beauty of love that is dead and comes to her eyes.
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nice..thanks
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thanks
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I love your take on the prompt. thank you for the explanation in the AN, it was very helpful. I loved the last 3 lines. a truly amazing poem.. excellent job
good luck
kat

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Thanks a lot night!
pri
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this is really amaszing
you did a stunning job
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Thanks a bunch!!
pri
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