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My Star

It seems so very long ago

 

 

In a time so very far away

 

 

I'd watch how people fell in love

 

 

and hoped one day I'd be that way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

When you're young at heart it's easy

 

 

to be caught up by the thought

 

 

that love is real and dreams come true

 

 

that your heart is won, not bought

 

 

 

 

 

But you'll learn, all too quickly

 

Oh you'll learn, all too well

 

that there is no happy ending

 

no pots of gold or wishing wells.

 

 

 

Here in the dark

 

I reach for you still

 

longing to feel you

 

to hold something real

 

 

 

I lie awake

 

and wonder how you are

 

here in this darkness

 

you're still my only star.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Some scrap work I had tucked away in one of my school folders. Part of a song I was working on at one point.

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  • Chrysalis
    June 2

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    Now there's a difference: to be young and in love and to be already be aware of what is love.
    But I loved how you put it more nicely:
    "that there is no happy ending
    no pots of gold or wishing wells"
    Brilliant write overall!


  • buffsab99 silver member
    May 4

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    Beautiful

    Brilliant write. There is nothing bad about your writing. Keep up the great work you have a great gift to share


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 3

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    You say that you are not a talented writer? This piece tells me otherwise. Brilliant writing. Keep it up. You have a talent.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • iiwuvyouxoxo
    April 28
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    is like the story of my life

    wow just amazing poem i love the line But you'll learn, all too quickly



    Oh you'll learn, all too well



    that there is no happy ending



    no pots of gold or wishing wells

    that was just well written its self
    the title fits but mabey have it as "my only star" which is last line. but all in all really well done