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Haiku #2

Lillies
on slender stems
Tremble

A contest entry

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  • DogFish silver member
    May 11
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    to paraphrase a haiku I read somewhere...

    I beleive that the kimono
    of that lady is too big


  • lucidlove
    April 30
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    Awe, sweety I love haikus and you've totally just made my night.


  • pania gold member
    April 30

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    lovely, fragile haiku

    tanka:

    unsounded trumpets look down
    waiting in silence for dark

  • Aerden gold member
    April 30
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    Lovely haiku!

    Winds too harsh
    Crush soft petals

  • sheltered
    April 28
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    Excellent!

    telling tolls
    chinook took


  • Bard-of-Shadows
    April 28
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    :)

    I love you Haiku's, Aubry. With just a few simple words, you paint a vivid scene

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