whenever i need a friend to lean on,
you were always there to comfort me.
you are always there to hold my hands,
whenever i feel fear inside my heart.
in times that i am crying,
you were there to wipe my tears.
and in times that ignorant is there,
you are there to teach me.
how thankful i am to my Lord,
for He allowed me to be inside you.
carry me for a long time,
and take care of me till now.
you never failed to come,
in precious moments in my life.
though there times conflict occurs,
we always find our ways to return.
i am not here if you are not here,
and i am not me if you are not you.
we promise to be there for each other,
no matter how far we can reach.
we care and love each other,
not because we just need to.
we do it not as a responsibility,
but deep in our hearts we are one.
when weakness will be present,
i will be there for you my bestfriend.
when sadness appears in your face,
i will bring you laughter my sister.
but above all i will not be there,
because i am always there.
we are connected and tied to one,
for you are my mom and no one else.
A contest entry
- Mothers Day by Gods Lil Warrior.
450 points, ended May 11, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mom's day! by ButterflyforChrist.
450 points, ended May 15, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
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479 points, ended June 22, 2008, 27 entries
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450 points, ended June 10, 2008, 46 entries
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This is very beautiful! Congratulations to you on your gold trophy for this write.
I love these lines:
"we care and love each other,
not because we just need to.
we do it not as a responsibility,
but deep in our hearts we are one."
There is no better feeling the world
than that of unconditional love. Great
work here my friend and keep it up!
Jeremy0826
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This is so beautiful Hun! I was deeply touched by this verse. Thank you so much for this entry...how wonderfully sweet this sentiment truly is!!! Welcome to my family Son!!! Nice to have you...I will be by to read so much more of you! I will add you to my page Hun!!!
Mom -
I'm overcome with emotion...This is beautiful... I'm left speechless.. This touches deep into my heart. Itmoves me deeply. I'm getting ready to go off to college this coming fall...and I'm terrified to be hundreds of miles from the woman I love the most... I've never been that far away from her. and I know in me heart she'll always be close...But nothing can replace that physical presence. This is fantastic. I love it. Thank you so much.
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thank you very much.. you made me happy.. this is my first gold.. i really made this full hearted for my mom.. Godbless you...much care ^_^
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This is a great poem.
You are a great poet.
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very nice
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This is indeed a honest write touching the blaze of the universal God yes HE is a mom and father as well...thanks for sharing it with me..well done....
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A heartfelt piece...so refreshing and full of warmth...
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thanks for your comment ^_^ very appreciated.. Godbless you..
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