I watch you like a stalker every night
You step outside gazing into the moonlight
My heart begins to beat more rapidly
Excited my body starts to shake
Silently sneaking closer to you
You then sit on the porch stairs
Appearing behind you without warning
I kiss you with my soft gray lips
Closing your eyes as you enjoy this sensation
Feeling as if you tasted a piece of heaven
As you slowly open to see nothing,
But remnants of a cloud of smoke
Your heart starts to beat faster
Body beginning to tremble
Don't worry I will watch over you everyday
Till the day we are together
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Aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww. I wouldn't say this is creepy love, but a lover without the other person. It is sad and beautifully dark. Thank you.
~Kystal Angel
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wow, creepy romantic goodness. i love the romantic take on it with such a dark twist
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whoa that gave me chills
and the piece of heaven part reminds me of the band Avenged Sevenfold.
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Wow.. this was just a little creepy romanttic...lol. I think that you did a really good job with the prompt.. You really told a story here, and I enjoyed it! bravo!
Jetleena
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Wow that isnt creepy at all O.o It's like an old perverted guy who watches pron on his balcany ^^ But nice one lmao
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