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the Catch of a breath

If you just say you need me
There'll be no choice left,
I'll be there,
in a heartbeat,
the blink of an eye,
the Catch, of a breath.

A contest entry

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  • Tigris
    May 31, 2008
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    This poem is a catch of a breath. wow. I love this. Thank you for your entry.


  • Topaze
    April 28, 2008
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    Very nicely done. My best wishes in the contest.


  • catz Moderators member
    April 28, 2008

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    Oh, this is lovely. Such thoughts, sincerly expressed

    Good luck in the contest

    Dee